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Blue Jeans Babe - A Poem By MC Wizhard

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on: December 30, 2017, 02:08:06 AM
BLUE JEANS BABE

Has i jumped into the river or fall
I know have started my voyage of heart
Blue deep signals that blink instead shine
That wrapped my eyes for the wench
Your blue jean that makes your blue eyes
makes me want to go deep in the river

I say when a man loves it's like swimming
in the blue river that covers it beneath
blind to see the danger and dirt
blind enough to open my heart again
I was once a victim of the deep blue river
Affected by a blue jean wench

Like the titanic wrecked and sanked
I stretch forth my helpless hands
Rant with the last kissing breath
But all i see now is a sack blue jean
She ran away and left me sinking
Left me the cloths that spears my heart

I can never forget this blue jean
It depict ladies in blue jean
Easier one to win and be won
Easy to fall in and out
Their keen is having crush on a rush
That makes a man trapped in the blue river.


"Poem Written By Wizhard"
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Reply #1 on: December 30, 2017, 03:11:03 AM
Who is this @wizhard guy? after reading this poem, I rushed to his profile to know about this guy o. I checked his profile and there is no information there. Like the titanic wrecked and sanked, I swam back here.

This is a very lovely poem, I so much like the use of words. Although some works needs to be done on punctuation. I can see a heart broken guy here left to sink in an ocean of love. The blue jeans that made him fall also made him sank.

He was abandoned in the deep helplessly as the blue jeans girl took a long walk.

I love it. Simple, lively and following.

Wizhard, keep it up. You have talents and a promising poet. I hope to read more
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Reply #2 on: December 30, 2017, 03:21:19 AM
Thanks for your sweet comment @lola that guy is actually my boy *wink*
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Reply #3 on: December 30, 2017, 03:24:24 AM
Thanks for your sweet comment @lola that guy is actually my boy *wink*

What is this one saying. You always know every talented people in this world. Liar.... if I....
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Reply #4 on: December 30, 2017, 03:26:43 AM
troublesome girl.
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Reply #5 on: December 30, 2017, 03:45:58 AM
This poem is so touching. I have walked through the lane before. Being left in the dark, broken and wrecked.

2 years ago, my girlfriend walked away from the relationship i cherished so much. I would give my life for her back then. The love was strong. And then on a sad day, she left me drowning and never came back. Its 2 years now since my blue jeans babe walked out on me.

I cried, begged sent friends and everyone. She never looked back. A sad experience but i got over it
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Reply #6 on: December 30, 2017, 03:50:32 AM
This poem is so touching. I have walked through the lane before. Being left in the dark, broken and wrecked.

2 years ago, my girlfriend walked away from the relationship i cherished so much. I would give my life for her back then. The love was strong. And then on a sad day, she left me drowning and never came back. Its 2 years now since my blue jeans babe walked out on me.

I cried, begged sent friends and everyone. She never looked back. A sad experience but i got over it

So sorry about that. She doesn't deserve you. A better person will definitely show up one day.
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Reply #7 on: December 30, 2017, 04:03:11 AM
I love this poem. But why is Wizhard profile blank. he should go and fill his profile. we want to know him o
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Reply #8 on: December 30, 2017, 04:07:17 AM
Nice poem..

We also have the blue jeans guys too. they are everywhere
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Reply #9 on: December 30, 2017, 04:11:42 AM
Blue jeans guys will even be better... i will write my own poem on "RED Garment GUYS"

It will be fun. The poem is a boy, so why won't he write for guys


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Reply #10 on: December 30, 2017, 04:13:05 AM
a very cool poem. Powerful and clear.

Almost everybody has wrecked even more than Titanic. Wicked slay queens are everywhere... let me run before they attack me


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Reply #11 on: December 30, 2017, 04:14:34 AM
better keep running. If I catch you, your heart will not be the only one that will be broken.
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Reply #12 on: December 30, 2017, 04:16:19 AM
a very cool poem. Powerful and clear.

Almost everybody has wrecked even more than Titanic. Wicked slay queens are everywhere... let me run before they attack me

If not because today is 30 ni. I would have shown you.....



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Reply #13 on: December 30, 2017, 04:20:30 AM
This poem is just reminding me some things in the past. Keep it up bro. I feel it.

I want to ask @Wizhard that: what motivated you to write this poem. is it a fiction or it happened to you?


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Reply #14 on: December 30, 2017, 04:21:44 AM
This poem just changed my mood. I have to sleep back or else today will be so looooong and moody


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Reply #15 on: December 30, 2017, 09:53:13 AM
Who is this @Wizhard guy? after reading this poem, I rushed to his profile to know about this guy o. I checked his profile and there is no information there. Like the titanic wrecked and sanked, I swam back here.

This is a very lovely poem, I so much like the use of words. Although some works needs to be done on punctuation. I can see a heart broken guy here left to sink in an ocean of love. The blue jeans that made him fall also made him sank.

He was abandoned in the deep helplessly as the blue jeans girl took a long walk.

I love it. Simple, lively and following.

Wizhard, keep it up. You have talents and a promising poet. I hope to read more
Am so sorry for the delay in my profile,now you can go and check it and also the qouted "punctuations",I wrote it on a rush that why and I promise to adjust . I really appreciate your comment and hopefully looking forward to seeing more of it.i also promise to update more of my works as long as your support is guaranteed. Thanks wizard 🕴
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Reply #16 on: December 30, 2017, 10:02:30 AM
@Wizhard its very nice you have time to reply us here.

I just checked your profile and its cool. You studied mass-Communication in Ibadan, you love Music and your turn off is Lies. You have a nice profile.

You are really welcome here. You already have my support. Just keep giving us and we will be here. I already have an apartment on this forum. Just keep the fire burning
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Reply #17 on: December 30, 2017, 10:05:04 AM
i checked your profile. I like Passenger too.

Can i ask you how you developed passion for poems. And what are the things that always inspire you. is it nature, Girls, Mood or anything that just come by.
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Reply #18 on: December 30, 2017, 10:35:39 AM
This poem is so touching. I have walked through the lane before. Being left in the dark, broken and wrecked.

2 years ago, my girlfriend walked away from the relationship i cherished so much. I would give my life for her back then. The love was strong. And then on a sad day, she left me drowning and never came back. Its 2 years now since my blue jeans babe walked out on me.

I cried, begged sent friends and everyone. She never looked back. A sad experience but i got over it
Putting myself in your shoe bro,i will like to say we are to be blamed for our good or bad experiences and circumstances, because to me we are semi God, we have both natural and supernatural powers to control our world. Well bro this is a controversial issues. But all the same thanks for your comment, looking forward to seeing more of ur support. Thanks wizard 🕴
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Reply #19 on: December 30, 2017, 10:48:36 AM
This poem is just reminding me some things in the past. Keep it up bro. I feel it.

I want to ask @Wizhard that: what motivated you to write this poem. is it a fiction or it happened to you?
It's a non functional work,and I wrote it through the inflicted pain though the title was stolen from Elton John blue jeans babe. Thanks for your comment and am looking forward to seeing more of it. Thanks wizhard 🕴
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Reply #20 on: December 30, 2017, 11:08:24 AM
i checked your profile. I like Passenger too.

Can i ask you how you developed passion for poems. And what are the things that always inspire you. is it nature, Girls, Mood or anything that just come by.
I developed my passion through my emotions,and that is the true definition of poetry. Also I have two sources of inspiration and that is nature and my mood because both draws my attention always to writing.Thanks wizhard 🕴
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Reply #21 on: December 30, 2017, 11:18:12 AM
@Wizhard its very nice you have time to reply us here.

I just checked your profile and its cool. You studied mass-Communication in Ibadan, you love Music and your turn off is Lies. You have a nice profile.

You are really welcome here. You already have my support. Just keep giving us and we will be here. I already have an apartment on this forum. Just keep the fire burning
Thanks sister Lola. Wizhard 🕴
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Reply #22 on: December 30, 2017, 11:25:02 AM
Thanks to you all, you can now check my profile it's free. I need more comments and shares from you, as more blessings fall on you.Thanks wizhard 🕴
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Reply #23 on: December 30, 2017, 11:33:43 AM
This poem just changed my mood. I have to sleep back or else today will be so looooong and moody
Eayah am really sorry. Don't be moody,just need to be yourself and take note of the message in the poem. I will be looking forward to seeing more of your comment.  Thanks wizhard 🕴
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Reply #24 on: December 30, 2017, 11:50:42 AM
nice one